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Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Partly Cloudy

  Partly Cloudy
Wispy clouds hover through the rose sky. Stalks soar in the sky landing on pink fluffy clouds. Magically the cloud zaps a pile of  clouds turning it into an animal figure. The cloud then wraps it into a plain white sheet and carefully hands it over to the stalk. The stalk glides through the sky carrying the plain white sheet to a dog kennel. while down below a dark grey cloud sadly peeks above to see pink rosy clouds making impressive figures. A bird landed on the dark grey cloud. The nearly featherless bird stood there wings wide open waiting for another delivery. The cloud got a pile and magically zaps it. A baby crocodile appears snapping and munching the cloud’s finger. The cloud handed the bird the sharp crocodile cautiously. The stalk reluctantly gripped the sheet by the tip and carefully hovered all over the place with the baby croc.The stalk flew back more featherless than before. The dark grey cloud moulded another pile and zapped a baby ram. The ram smashed into the stalk leaving the bird a painful gutt feeling. The cloud tied the ram into another plain sheet and and flew off into the distance. A bald patch sat upon the bird’s head. The

10 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed your story and I loved your drawing of what happened. Did you use a background similar to the video you watched.

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  3. I really like your story Room 3 keep up the good work

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  4. Hi Rm 3 it's Awatea from Rm 17 here. I really like your blog because it sounds amazing. Your picture looks cool too. Well done!

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  5. Hi I'm Dylan from Te Awamutu Primary School, that is an amazing story.How long did it take you to write it?

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  6. it took me two days to write this story.

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  7. it took me two days to write this story.

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