Tuesday, June 23, 2015

Tyissa's Giraffe Story

Long, lanky legs gracefully stroll down the winding corridors as they make there way to the pool.They line up silently. One of their teammates slowly comes down from the ceiling, ready to help them to make the perfect dive.

They run as fast as they can, tucking their legs in as they jump, landing in the water with no splash.  They slowly make their way back up the ramp waiting for their next turn.  They are ready and they notice another one of their teammates there to help them.

They all finish their turn so they slowly line up silently across the edge of the pool and dip in the pool to take a little sip of water.  Suddenly they hear a sound, a creaking door, and the giraffes sprint away knowing they can't be seen.

Week 10's Writing Prompt

WALT use show not tell to describe an event

Success Criteria: We can...
  • use a variety of descriptive language e.g. similes, metaphors, alliteration, show not tell etc

Friday, June 19, 2015

Room 3's Awesome Mural

We all worked very hard on our class mural and are so proud of the finished piece. We can't wait to see them put up around the school! :)